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Unfinished Tales of the Exile, Issue 3, Page 4 by AshleyKayley Unfinished Tales of the Exile, Issue 3, Page 4 by AshleyKayley
Moving along in the story, nearly back to the group and some action!

Seriously, I deserve an award for how many lengthy holologs I compressed into one page. Some things that work well for exposition and play in a game don't translate well for a comic.

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This is a not-for-profit fan project. Knights of the Old Republic 2, The Sith Lords, is owned by LucasArts, and ultimately by Disney.
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unit1138 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist
I've probably said it befor but I'll say it again.  Your comic is great, the art the layout, it's wonderful.  Albeit a little dialog heavy, though you can't really be faulted for that as these kotor games are around 60% dialog.
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MudslingerArtist Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013   Digital Artist
Sweeeeet ^^ I just got back into playing after buying the PC version - and it feels as good as new ^^
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midna98 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
Nice!
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Te-Derkan Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
Hey, just read the whole thing you did, and well, must say i like it =D Kinda obvious for me, since the Exile is my favorite character in the whole Star Wars universe. Keep up with the good work =D
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Lord0Slayer Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Sith's about to get real.

Anyone? Eh? Eh? 

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darkwarrior Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Looks like things are getting intense.
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Ioialoha Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
yes, yes you do. that's a pretty packed panel lol
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lordhadrian Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Very cool :)
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kryptocow Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yeahhh! :dance: 

I love her thinking face as she listens. 
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Mangetsu20 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I personally liked Paragus because the mystery and the horror element to it. It was almost like a toned down, SW version of BioShock, where you're coming into a place littered with dead bodies, mysteries, and crazy machines (later assassins) trying to kill you. 

I do like how Ally is working her way through this big plot as she goes. It goes to show you how intuitive and strong she really is, even as a rusty Force user. ;) 
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iaiusjello Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
yeah, it must suck to have to include all the necessary exposition for the story to make sense without assuming the reader knows everything about KOTOR2... good work fitting in all that dialogue. At least this won't be as much of a problem once she starts meeting more people.
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AshleyKayley Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't mind all the dialogue when it's with people...but Peragus is nothing but log after log after log!:o (Eek)
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iaiusjello Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Exactly! People have action and expressions... plenty of stuff going on for you to dazzle us with. Those audio logs though... the station can't get blown up soon enough!
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Tarturus Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True, what works well in a game may not work so well in a comic. Still, the hololog recordings you included do have relevance to the story, so that works out fairly well. ^^
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theant4 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it! The big panel in the middle is especially awesome - the perspective with her hand, her facial expression, everything! 
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GunMasterG3 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Up Next: HK-50 and Darth Sion,right?
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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
new page... and so much exposition.
In the second panel, Lelle seems to be drifting between feeling sad for everyone and "Please, Gods, let these logs be over" ... like she wants to cry for more and more reasons but she won't let herself.

Somewhat amusingly, the last panel almost looks like she killed those last two miners, though given the wider context, we all know they were already long dead ;)

If memory serves, we are almost to Sleeps-With-Vibroblades :)
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AshleyKayley Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It does kind of have a "I just murdered these people!" look to it, but in context it should be obvious. Otherwise Lelle just went over the edge.
I really appreciate your thoughtful comments by the way!Hug

Sleeps with vibroblades is in our near future. Mwahahahahahahaha!
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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
Glad to help :hug:

And yay! Bring on Sleeps-With-Vibroblades :mwahaha:
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